#1
I think the chorus needs some work. Suggestions would be appreciated.

Verse 1:
Come away with me
and take this ride
Away from our fears
we'll go someplace quiet
We'll share all our truths
and confess all our lies
Let our feelings come out
underneath the moonlight
Set your feet in the water,
take a seat on the bank
Wash your hands of your troubles,
let the river take them away
Tell me of your fortunes,
your mishaps, your pains
Let me know how your doing;
make your struggles fade away

Chorus:
Come with me,
get away from this place
Let's go to the heavens
where our love is complete
Take my hand
and don't look down
We'll mend all we can
before we return to the ground
On this Springtime get away

Verse 2:
Fasten your seatbelt
lets take a trip
Time for a vacation
to get away from all of this
Share with me your blessings;
tell me of what you wish
I want to know all your heartache
and fulfill your emptiness
Let the wind pass through your fingers
feel the breeze on your face
It will take away all your hardships;
leave your mind at ease
Feel the Spring Sun shine down
may it bring you peace
Let free all your sorrow
let the sun kiss you with grace

Chorus:
Come with me,
get away from this place
Let's go to the heavens
where our love is complete
Take my hand
and don't look down
We'll mend all we can
before we return to the ground
On this Springtime get away

Bridge:
I know it's hard sometimes
Please don't wory it'll be alright
Wash yourself of your sin
Fall to your knees, release all your burdens

Chorus:
Come with me,
get away from this place
Let's go to the heavens
where our love is complete
Take my hand
and don't look down
We'll mend all we can
before we return to the ground
On this Springtime get away
For all of you guys out there that think I am depressed. I AM NOT DEPRESSED!!!!!!!!

I only chose thins name cuz some people thought I was depressed just cuz i sat alone at lunch and wrote poems and songs and stories. what the **** is that all about?