i dont know what to classify this recording but no other than crap...
I need help with a bassline. Any ideas are welcomed. If you would like to collaborate with me id appreciate it. Also, id like the bassline to be something around 70's 80's punk. A really "Spunk" riff

It's called Aneurysm
I'm so gothic i poop bats
Not really my type of stuff, but the riffs are pretty good.

Overall, it sounds way to raw, MIDI-ish, computerized, etc. The drums sound really bad, you wrote the drum piece nicely and the drums would sound great if they sounded more real, so not a composition flaw but you should get a better drum program or something.