#1
Dimebag died on December 8th
Best career move he ever did make
His album sales more than doubled that day
Cause some psycho took his life away

Cobain went and blew his brains out
Or was it Courtney Love, we'll probably never find out
But now he's got preteens licking his ass
Shame he didn't stay to collect all the cash

Necrophiliacs galore
Fucking the dead
Riding their cocks and giving them head
Nevermind the living, just wait till they're stiff
Cause there's no point in riding a living man's dick

My neighbor died last night
A jackass he was
Drunken day and night and from his couch never budged
But don't disrespect the dead
Only ream out their butts
"A great man!" they say about the ignorant fuck

Necrophiliacs galore
Fucking the dead
Riding their cocks and giving them head
Nevermind the living, just wait till they're stiff
Cause there's no point in riding a living man's dick

Yeah

Could be like.. an irish pub kind of song. I'm hearing Flogging Molly with a cause here.
#2
haha, well umm, it was catchy, thats all i can say
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#4
Quote by MastaBassist10
Dimebag died on December 8th
Best career move he ever did make
His album sales more than doubled that day
Cause some psycho took his life away



Sad but true...
#6
ur stupid, dime wuz god. rip.

I agree, you should make it longer.
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#7
Quote by rockinlespaul
Wow.

That's weird.

Pretty cool really.

I didn't like the second to last verse though. Just didn't flow, didn't fit. I guess you could replace it with another rock star?

I wanted the last line to strike a bit "closer to home."

Keep in mind I literally opened up "New Thread" and typed this on the spot, so not everything is gonna be perfect, flow wise.
#9
Quote by MastaBassist10
I wanted the last line to strike a bit "closer to home."

Keep in mind I literally opened up "New Thread" and typed this on the spot, so not everything is gonna be perfect, flow wise.


Gotcha. That's really cool then. I would just reccomend that you work on the flow of that verse. Its a tad rough.

I'm impressed. In a creepy way.
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#10
Wow, you speak the truth my friend. Recently seeing my hero Joe Strummer sell boots whilst in his grave, I'm in totally agreence (is that a word?) with you. I found nothing wrong with the lyrics besides a few pacing problems (mainly the last verse but it's probably just the way I'm reading it). I don't know if you were joking, but the irish pub style would work. I think making it in a style where it's overly-serious would kill it. It needs to be a lighthearted song.. about screwing the dead. Great job, I was shocked into laughing the whole time. Very clever. Crit my piece?

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