#1
Well hmm. i wrote this in about 3 minutes, i really didn't mean for it to have a meaning so yeahhh. i don't know. but here it is. it's just a start.


Plastic Landscapes fill the blank voids
Fake trees are planted to make a lie believable
the towns people are replaced with andriods
filled with hate and evil.

Noise fills in the slience
Pollution covers the air
These robots show defiance
With a thought no human can bare.


yeah...
Last edited by Megalomanic9345 at Jun 24, 2007,
#2
Wow....it's like a prediction for the future being all androidish and stuff....

Like iRobot lol. Pretty good writing though I kinda liked it. Maybe extend the line "Filled with hate and evil" so it flows more?
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