#1
hey there, i have just recorded a short song (or perhaps a section of a longer song which this could be part of), tell me what you think! I have had my 4 track for about a week, and this was just a bit of fun. any constructive criticism would be much appreciated.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ns1fQQW862k

cheers guys
#3
Maybe you could work a little bit on the last part (solo guitar part). But I think it's ok, you could use it as an intro to some ****ed up album. Rock on dude!
Close your eyes and bow your head
I need a little sympathy
Cause fear is strong and love's for everyone
Who isn't me


LAUFER
#5
cheers for the replies. it does seem to be intro like, maybe i'll get some fast riff after. im ****e at staying in time and playing in intresting time sigs though. and the last bit was rushed, i just wanted to bring it to some sort of a conclusion. will work on it and put an updated version on in a few weeks or months. guitar hack, your songs pretty sweet, not really my type of music but its well recorded.