hey there, i have just recorded a short song (or perhaps a section of a longer song which this could be part of), tell me what you think! I have had my 4 track for about a week, and this was just a bit of fun. any constructive criticism would be much appreciated.


cheers guys
Maybe you could work a little bit on the last part (solo guitar part). But I think it's ok, you could use it as an intro to some ****ed up album. Rock on dude!
Close your eyes and bow your head
I need a little sympathy
Cause fear is strong and love's for everyone
Who isn't me

cheers for the replies. it does seem to be intro like, maybe i'll get some fast riff after. im ****e at staying in time and playing in intresting time sigs though. and the last bit was rushed, i just wanted to bring it to some sort of a conclusion. will work on it and put an updated version on in a few weeks or months. guitar hack, your songs pretty sweet, not really my type of music but its well recorded.