#1
3rd song of ours is up .. please check it out and let us know what you think.. just guitar and bass for right now but we just want to know what people think of the music itself..

there are actually 3 on there so crit any or all of them..

thanks, link in sig c4c
monoslang.bandcamp.com

reverbnation.com/monoslang
#3
if you clicked on any that say full length (any of the top 3 songs).. they should all be right around 3 minutes .. so im not sure if myspace is cutting them off or not.. yeah man.. i will crit yours
monoslang.bandcamp.com

reverbnation.com/monoslang
#4
It's a good start to what could be a good song if you add vocals and drums. It got kind of boring because there aren't any real solos and the same riff was pretty much played over and over. But like I said, it could be a very cool song if you add a good vocal melody and some drums. Another thing, I didn't really like the tone of the bass, it sounded like an acoustic bass being recorded through a mic. Try to add more bass and make it blend in better.

Crit for Crit?
My stuff
Fender Telecaster Aerodyne Series
Gibson 1980 Les Paul Standard
Fender Standard Strat
Taylor 414-ce
Takamine Acoustic
1938 Gibson Lap Steel (priceless)
Fender Blues Junior
USA Big Muff Pi
Danelectro Fab Overdrive

My band