#1
This is a short Death Metal song I wrote in one day. Nothing else to say really...Listen for yourself and comment, good or bad :P Crit for crit as always
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#2
Dude...what's up the time signatures?

What's the point in that, other to make you sound flashy?

Generally though it sounded a bit disorganised, and just like random riffs chucked together. They were all good riffs but they didn't really blend together to make a coherent song. Especially liked the one at the end.

Crit something of mine (preferably second in sig)?
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#3
Dude...what's up the time signatures?

lol when a riff that is in my head doesn't fit in 4/4, i change the signature until it fits, simple as that
#4
Yes, I'm not saying it should be in 4/4 but all of those riffs should and could be simplified. For example, 12/16 = 3/4.
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#5
i like it dude more complex than alot of mainstream metal I hear the only thing is i would recommend establishing a common them that ties into each riff
#6
btw, alot of those riffs did fit into 4/4... you just had one part something like 12/16, and the other 4/16... 12/16 + 4/16 = 16/16 = 4/4 =
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#7
Well, for one, like some other people have said, you can simplify A LOT of the time signatures. I like the riff in measure 5. I also like measure 16. Like somebody else said, try making a common theme that ties into each riff. I can't really say much other than that. It wasn't really my cup of tea, I found it a bit disorganized so I'm going to have to say 6/10.
#9
I listened midi, it's like doo doo doo doo, doo doo doo doo, then a cool riff, then a trippy one
then a cool riff, then a trippy one, then it's like doo doo doo doo again.
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#11
at least this is actually death metal... i liked it, maybe a little too short, and idk what the tim sig talk is cuz i midi'ed it and it sounds real good to me
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