this is good sutff my friend, would you mind if put this on my radio show on UG radio? if i can, jsut send me an email with artist info and a litte bio if you could. thanks!
bee yatch
very nice work. all the intstrumentation(word?) was nice and appropriate. i dig the chorus. some of the lyrics i felt were a bit cheesy or awkward, and could be improved on, but overall very nice.

if you have any time/feel like it at all you could crit my new song. -http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=613874
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