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This is my first piece and though I think it came out as more of a poem, though I intended for it to be a song.


I attempt to reach out
For the sky and the sun
But it burns the flesh of
Those who have long forsaken it
Among them I await my sentence

Ashen kisses lie in my wake
And dawn brings new breath
Into this reality of deceit
That I cloak my cadaver in

The light brings a hope
Of renewal and rejoice
For the denizens of that life
But to the maggots of hell
It scorches the infinity of thought

Ashen kisses lie in my wake
And dawn brings new breath
Into this reality of deceit
That I cloak my cadaver in

And a broken evening precedes
the end of accursed existence
Hear the holy ones descend
To grind me into oblivion
And erase the memories

And the threads break away
to unravel my glories
And atrocities
The woven cloak falls away
this scarred face breathes again
And the cycle is complete
Dart of the Dragoons Pm big_deth to join
Last edited by jetpelkey41 at Jun 25, 2007,