#3
thanks for the crit

The opening riff reminds me a lot of some Strokes song - one of their big singles, forgot what its called though. The vocals sound decent, but the sound quality is pretty bad on them. How are you recording this? I feel like there's too much reverb on the whole track and its too tinny. I'd really like to hear this with a full band - it would really fill it out. You've got some cool riffs in here, and I think it has the potential to be a pretty cool song.
#4
thanks for the crit.

the first riff reminded me of the strokes, like the above dude said. something about the vocals sounds weird. it's really hard to crit this without a full band, so you should go for that and some better recording. peace
#5
it was really cool. it wood've been nice to hear it with a full band,or at least some drums,lol. But i thought the vocals were really, Maynard James Keenan-esque(Tool's singer) . Definitly wood've been nicer with a better recording.
#6
Well, this song definitely needs a lot of work. I could only listen about 30 seconds of it - that itself tells something... Basically, everything on this song needs to be worked, but start by getting a steady groove in the background. Also, if you intend to keep singing I suggest to take some lessons. So yeah, keep playing and making music. You just need a lot of practice but we've all been there.