#1
thanks for listening in advance

hope you enjoy
crit 4 crit
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Ticking away the moments that make up a dull day
You fritter and waste the hours in an offhand way
Kicking around on a piece of ground in your home town
Waiting for someone or something to show you the way
Last edited by Dimebag22 at Jun 27, 2007,
#2
I liked it, but at M51...omg....that is SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO overused.
#3
Thanks for the crit.

Youu need anything for me to crit back?
Ticking away the moments that make up a dull day
You fritter and waste the hours in an offhand way
Kicking around on a piece of ground in your home town
Waiting for someone or something to show you the way
Last edited by Dimebag22 at Jul 2, 2007,
#4
Not bad. not bad at all. Heavenly was right though.. measure 51 is use ALOT. try steer away from rhythms such as that.

But ****ing hell... bar 27 riff was ****ing awesome. i love it so much.. well done.. thats a good piece of music.

The solo was okies too :P

Please crit my work.. it needs it :P
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=614140
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#5
The bass threw me off a LOT, at least druing the first part. Pre-bar 27 can use a lot of work, but as hzac said, it was VERY well done. I dunno if you're unfinished or not, but it just kinda...ends, so work on that too.

Overall though, decent work.