#1
Well, I wrote this awhile back. It has a guitar part to it, really simple chords. Constructive criticism, please. I like it somewhat, but I hate how I made the rhyming. It just kinda happened. Seems a little to corny, though... and occasionally it doesn't make a lot of sense, but it works with the tune.


Oh, beautiful simplicity/
I love the way you look at me/
the smile in your eyes/
lights up my life/
you love to sing, you love to say/
that everything will be ok/
it's so hard to believe/
that there's something up your sleeve.

and I hate to think the worst/
but it won't help me deal with this hurt/
this pain that's killing me.

I know you'll never let me go/
you say that in my ear every night, everytime/
we lay around.
And I hope you'll nevre change/
forever stay the same/
I love who you are.

Oh, beautiful simplicity/
you love to have your way with me/
you are my everything/
I swear that nothing/
will hold us down, will break the bond/
that we share as we sing our song/
of meant to be/
of you and me.

and I hate to think the worst/
but it won't help me deal with this hurt/
this pain that's killing me.

I know you'll never let me go/
you say that in my ear every night, everytime/
we lay around.
And I hope you'll nevre change/
forever stay the same/
I love who you are.

Don't let me go...
Don't let me go...
Don't let me go...
Don't let me go...

I know you'll never let me go/
you say that in my ear every night, everytime/
we lay around.
And I hope you'll nevre change/
forever stay the same/
I love who you are.

Oh, beautiful simplicity/
won't you run away with me?
Oh, beautiful simplicity/
you don't know what you mean to me/
Oh, beautiful simplicity/
you and I are meant to be/
Oh, beautiful simplicity/
I love who you are.


tada.