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I wrote this song for my band that I am starting. It kinda just came to me. The song is made to be sung in 6/8 time. Um... basically the song is about breaking away from a problem you have and feeling disconnected. Crit 4 Crit!


Severed Return

Verse 1
A chain is broken in two
I can't seem to shake this image of you
I made to think that I am home

Alas, an empty space
With memories I can't erase
I am lost and alone

Pre- Chorus
Far away
And close to home
I'll make today
Yesterday's clone

Chorus
Watch the wildfire
As it burns
Claim the mistakes
As you learn
Lament and tremble
And dissasemble
The way back home
Is nothing but a severed return

Verse 2
You told me the truth
I took it but what's the use
The lies are what made me whole

As I runaway
I wonder if I should stay
I'll fix the wrongs and make them right

Pre Chorus
Far away
And close to home
I'll make today
Yesterday's clone

Chorus

Bridge
Everything that I knew
Lost
Memories of you
Lost
I'm on the verge on breaking down
Peace in my soul
Lost
Self Control
Lost
I'm on the verge of breaking down
Breaking Down!!!

Chorus x2