#1
(Verse)
Was born out of luck,
Nowhere I can turn,
I'm trying my best not to go insane,
A rush of blood,
Intents plaguing my head,
This ain't how I thought it would be at all
Back to the wall,
It's my fare-well tour,
So long ya ****er, hope you Rot in Hell.
(Chorus)
Head's in a spin, There's no escape,
These monsters'll Eat you Alive.
(Verse)
A blade in my mind,
Lines startin' to Blur,
Can't even tell what's real anymore,
These shapes are but blurs,
They used to comfort,
A last stand for the way I used to be
Back to the wall,
it's my fare-well tour,
So long ya ****er, hope you Rot in Hell,
(Chorus)
Head's in a spin, THere's no escape,
These monsters'll Eat You Alive.
(Final Verse)
Taking a step back,
all my hope has died,
Broken mind, but a working body still
Don't know where to turn,
Fear stalks my trail,
She haunt my mind, Waking myself screaming,
Back to the wall,
Was my fare-well tour,
Just **** off & die, I walk alone now
(Final Chorus)
Head's In a spin, I know my fate,
These monsters Ate Me Alive.

(My main concern - is it a bit too Emo? If not, I'm happy...Unless it's **** instead. Any thoughts?)
The rig:
Gibson SG faded special -> Marshall MG 50/100 (working on a valve amp)
Backup: Vintage AV1
Newcastle United
#3
lol, it's not emo, read my work, it's more emo than anything. . anyway, I only had one problem with it.
A blade in my mind,
Lines startin' to Blur,
Can't even tell what's real anymore,
These shapes are but blurs,
They used to comfort,
A last stand for the way I used to be
Back to the wall,
it's my fare-well tour,
So long ya ****er, hope you Rot in Hell,

The two blurs in the same verse, well they kinda mess it up a little, if you could find a different word for the second blur, it'd be fine. Other than that it's good.
"Penis"
"That's right kids, I said penis"
:stickpoke
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