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Good Days in Bad Weather

I've seen your happy days
When I held you close, you know that I'm amazed
And you could change a hundred times
I'd still be round to see you as you shine

And that is why it's so hard to hear you cry

Cause we had good days together
Good days in bad weather
And today it's no better
But I don't mind the rain
Cause your sun shines just the same

I've seen you in my dreams
We've lived a life from blandness to extremes
And I could waste a hundred years
When I see you smile you melt away my fears

And that is why it's so hard to know you cry

Cause we had good days together
Good days in bad weather
And today it's no better
But I don't mind the rain
Cause your sun shines just the same

I've seen you at your worst
I know the things to do to make you go berserk
And I've got hundreds of regrets
But none for you, the sun that never sets

And that is why it's so hard to see you cry

Cause we had good days together
Good days in bad weather
And today it's no better
But I don't mind the rain
Cause we had good days together
Good days in bad weather
And I should know better
Than to sit here in the rain
Until your sun comes out again
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I've seen your happy days
When I held you close, you know that I'm amazed
And you could change a hundred times
I'd still be round to see you as you shine

And that is why it's so hard to hear you cry
---This is good, i like the repetition of 'And that is why it's so hard to hear you cry' throughout the song


Cause we had good days together
Good days in bad weather
And today it's no better
But I don't mind the rain
Cause your sun shines just the same
---This is great, i wouldn't change anything


I've seen you in my dreams
We've lived a life from blandness to extremes
And I could waste a hundred years
When I see you smile you melt away my fears
---Great, possibly find a new word instead of blandness, doesn't seem to flow. But im just being picky as theres not really anything wrong with these lyrics.


Cause we had good days together
Good days in bad weather
And today it's no better
But I don't mind the rain
Cause we had good days together
Good days in bad weather
And I should know better
Than to sit here in the rain
Until your sun comes out again
---A nice ending to the song. The weather theme to the song nicely rounds off with the lines 'Than to sit here in the rain
Until your sun comes out again