#1
Something I had laying around.

Wondering what I should do with it. Tell me what you think.

Any crit welcome. Crit for Crit.


Thanks
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dance dah.zip
Last edited by guitarguy5515 at Jun 29, 2007,
#3
The intro piano was great....and the strings were good too, specially when the synth ones come. I think you should add variations to the piano riff....or change it after a while, cause it gets repetitive.
I liked the bass at 30....but the acoustic part gets kind of boring after a while....maybe try different timing and stuff?
At 34 the guitar was great....and maybe you should use that percussion you have there
It is kind of short (counting the repetitiveness). Maybe you could make some arpeggios and chords with the acoustics and add another piano melody on top, or make a piano solo or something like that....
So far it is good

Wanna crit mine? (one of my 7 last ones in my sig if you can)
#4
Thanks to both of you. Yeah I haven't messed with that in a few months. I just got all my ideas down. I'm gonna add more to it. Layer it up a bit. Haha and add the drums sitting there.
#7
^I'm actually a guitar player. I'm in need of a piano/keyboard player but I can't seem to find one =/
#8
^I'm actually a guitar player. I'm in need of a piano/keyboard player but I can't seem to find one =/.

Thanks to all you guys. Sounds like something I got to finish