#5
well its been a while...ive been finished for a long time but i was just too lazy to put it up until now...so here it is
i guess this is one of my softer songs...
in fact it's the softest song ive ever written!

C4C!!!

Last edited by fav13andac1)c at Apr 12, 2009,
#6
Thats amazing dude. Absolutely amazing. So original my god.
That must have taken a very long time to compose. thats tight.
I really liked the parts where you slowed the whole rhythm down. except one of the chords sounded wrong. just my opinion.

Thanks for the crit on my piece!