well its been a while...ive been finished for a long time but i was just too lazy to put it up until now...so here it is
i guess this is one of my softer songs...
in fact it's the softest song ive ever written!


Last edited by fav13andac1)c at Apr 12, 2009,
Thats amazing dude. Absolutely amazing. So original my god.
That must have taken a very long time to compose. thats tight.
I really liked the parts where you slowed the whole rhythm down. except one of the chords sounded wrong. just my opinion.

Thanks for the crit on my piece!