#1
just wrote it the other day...still a work in progress

I was too weak,
To make it through.
I needed help,
When I found you.
You sat me down,
We found the truth,
And I owe you.
I owe you.

You saved me from,
The fatal knife.
Because of you,
I have my life.
From this point on,
I will think twice.
Now I owe you.
I owe you.

You were the one,
I looked up to.
I was in need,
And I had you.
You’re strength gave me,
A path to choose.
I changed my life,
Because of you.

The years have passed,
Our lives have changed.
The world is spinning,
A different way.
And now it’s you,
Who needs saved,

And I owe you.
I owe you.
We’ll make it through,
That’s what we do.
I owe you.
Last edited by hbp0819 at Jun 30, 2007,
#2
i liked it, it was very simple. I especially like the second verse it was really meaningful. overall great job.......

p.s read the rules before you post....dont have a title put "Untitled"
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#3
Quote by Fallen_Misery
i liked it, it was very simple. I especially like the second verse it was really meaningful. overall great job.......

p.s read the rules before you post....dont have a title put "Untitled"


thanks!

i changed the thread title.... wasn't sure if i should put "untitled" because some people name their songs "untitled" and I am planning on naming it eventually.

Any ideas for a title? It was originally "I owe you", but I don't like that