#1
Well, I recorded this for the one take acoustic contest, so there are some flaws, but tell me what you think about my voice. (thats my main concern.)

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EDIT: Yeah I know that the first talking bit is a bit too fast, but it gets better when I actually sing)
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Last edited by leid sepplin at Jun 30, 2007,
#2
Turn up the vocals and turn down the guitar. This song is about the words, i mean it's a humor song

When i do hear the vocals, they're good, actually now as i get further into the song, they're very good. Turn them up in the beginning.

Also, you need to work on the timing of the guitar more. But those vocals are more than acceptable, they falter in the end a bit though.

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#3
Yeah, I know that the guitar was a little off, but I rerecorded it, and put it up there. Thanks for the crit!
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#4
the guitaring and vocals are fine but you should sing out a little more

maybe its just that i can't totally hear you

the speaking voice is fine

one thing though, the woah woah after the devil snort sounds a little off

other than that i enjoyed it =)