#1
SOMEDAY

someday you will see, dreams trapped within my soul.
into grim you throw my smile, slowly like a demons touch
the thing of evil or a queen of snow tales in echo and nothing more
only you can break me gently, fill me slowly just like Freya.

when i said i love... i lied, when i screamed i hate i tried.
I tried... i tried to make you mine, i tried... to leave behind.

the things i canot say,
the pain i cant delay...
to find a better place,
a better place for you and me...

i know i havent said enough, to make you feel like me
maybe one day you will see, the dream you live aint reality
and baby please know how it realy felt to me
maybe songs i make aint enough to make you feel like me...

when i said i love... i lied, when i screamed i hate i tried.
I tried... i tried to make you mine, i tried... to leave behind.

the things i canot say,
the pain i cant delay...
to find a better gown,
a better place for you and him...
Last edited by svartberg at Jun 30, 2007,
#2
uhhhh...... i think u should rephrase some of that...... ok alot.... it didn't reely make much sense to me, sorry!!! it has a reely good base idea though. work on it and it could be pretty awesome. nice try dude!