#1
In a cage I shout
Fearing what happens next
Pushed into an arena forced to fight
Hoping to stand victourious to gain a normal life

(Chorus)
Waiting there for me waiting inside
I can't defeat him no matter how hard I try
He's always there never leaving
He's my own enemy inside

I thrust the sword into my enemy
Tearing apart my flesh as he starts to fight
I fall to my knees as he stabs more and more
In the breeze of death my body weakens

(Solo/Bridge)
(Chorus)
Waiting there for me waiting inside
I can't defeat him no matter how hard I try
He's always there never leaving
He's my own enemy inside

Hate of life prayer of death
Dead inside I toss my sword aside
My life is neverending, Lucifer controls me
Now all I can do is hope my enemy will die

(Chorus)
Waiting there for me waiting inside
I can't defeat him no matter how hard I try
He's always there never leaving
He's my own enemy inside


I just want some feedback some of my friends liked it but I want some other opinions
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Kramer Vanguard

Les Paul Copy with Seymour Duncan Invaders
#2
Good deep lyrics. I like how the last verse shows the rage of having to go through such a life. Overall, I don't have much to say, but good job.
"I've been visiting a psychiatrist for some time now. He plays mind games. He asks things like 'do you masturbate'? and I say 'do you breathe?'."
Ozzy - 1975