I liked it but your vocals were very unsure/shaky which made you sound very nervous and dropped down its quality.
ya the vocals were unsure because I was reading the lyrics I know what you are saying though. Thanks for the feedback.
Wow man, that's really good! I thought the vocals were pretty good actually. Is this one of your first live performances? This isn't a criticism at all, more an obvservation, but it kinda showed in the first minute or so that you appear quite nervous (voice little shakey, foot tapping quickly). But after about a minute u seemed much more relaxed.

Especially good considering it was live, and obviously you can't hav retakes live lol, i couldn't hear any errors either.

Well done once again,

btw, i would very much appreciate if you would crit my recording, link below, cheers