#1
Constructive criticism please?


I just want to say
something meaningful
before I go down
not kicking and screaming
but all worn out
This is the end of the world
and I cant think of a thing to say
This is the sound of my world
as all I know fades away
Don't you care at all?
Isn't that what you said?
Giant words so small
I am seeing black specks in the red
Then all this stops
And it doesn't make a difference
Love and hate wash away in the stiffness
As everything is lost in the distance