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Well, I made this recently, I'm gonna edit it and redo it, but this is the first draft. Crits are appreciated

Darkness consumes and illuminates
Following endless to endless
From Heaven's Doors to Hell's Gates
Until the soul is lost to the darkness
Lost to the black of the darkest of night.
But coming forth, the morning
Sending out amongst the fields the faintest light
Golden laces on the blackest one
Faintly traced and seeping in
And hope arrives with the sun
In an interstellar burst! I am back to save the universe...