this is a short piece that is totally different from anything i have ever written before... i'm trying to branch out more but this is just my first attempt at a more poetic writing style.

I’m checking to make sure everything sent like it should
It’s fine but something between us isn’t, fix it
Being there with you is something I would do if I could
I hope you aren’t holding that against me, six months
Of not seeing you again has come to be normal
Unfortunately I’m leaving with or without you
But you’re still in all the dreams my mind can construe
I’m still somewhere beneath this gray eastern sky
But all day, you’ve been floating around my mind
Perfection is something we’ll always seek but never grasp
It’s a shame that all those memories have to remain in the past
Last edited by guitardan76 at Jul 10, 2007,