#1
This is the 2nd song I've ever written. I know its pretty rough and time slips sometimes. Is the song worth finishing, though? I planned on adding some soft bluesy solos over an interlude or something.

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#2
I guess it could turn into something when more gets added however your strumming technigue needs a bit work...when strumming try picking the root note of the chord before strumming...it may help your technique and improve your strumming.

Not trying to be mean...just trying to help...strumming needs some work.
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#3
I know. I'm not much of a strummer. I usually metal and whatnot. Acoustic strumming is fairly new to me.
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ESP EC-500 EMG 81/85
Mesa Boogie MK III
Marshall 1960B cab