#1
I've written a new riff. But I wanna know which riff is better, the one at bars one through sixteen or 17 - 18 or ... 19 - 30 or finally 31 - 34.
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#2
i personally like 19-30 the best

1-18 is pretty good, but it takes too much time to build

they're all pretty cool though, IMO
#3
i liked all the riffs, except for the first one.
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#4
I didn't like the riffs, sounds like something sum 41 would write. maybe try to cut back on that tremolo style picking thing after each chord and go with a more metal or rock style riff. listen to some black sabbath to get an idea of what metal should sound like(least the kind i'm thinking of )

speaking of sabbath

heres my version of the Paranoid solo. maybe take a quick look(Crit 4 crit right?)
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#6
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I didn't like the riffs, sounds like something sum 41 would write. maybe try to cut back on that tremolo style picking thing after each chord and go with a more metal or rock style riff. listen to some black sabbath to get an idea of what metal should sound like(least the kind i'm thinking of )

speaking of sabbath

heres my version of the Paranoid solo. maybe take a quick look(Crit 4 crit right?)


who said metal should always sound like sabbath man as you can see he likes trivium from his avatar thus hes going for a more metalcore melodic approach and his riff suit that genre nicely, tbh ive never heard sum41 play stuff like that but w/e.

i think all the riffs actually apart from the last one, cos theres nothing really to it unless its simple a riff to join 2 sections or whatever.