#1
Just a little poetic song I wrote.

Well unlucky me, got a tear in my sleave,
just walkin down the street,
trying to make my leave.

I look to the ground,
guess what I found,
something small, shiny, jagged and round.

(Instrumental)

"I can use this" I thought.
"This will take me somewhere' I thought again.

Just then a woman came up to me askin if I had a coin to lend.

Well let me tell you, I thought to my self again and again,
and I figured "I could give this woman my coin to lend."

So I held out my hand and said "you take care."
She replied "not as long as I'm stuck here."

(Instrumental)

Well I continued walkin down street,
Don't know where I'm going just folllowing my feet.

I thought "well I better get back home,
but I dont know wich way to go."

(Instrumental)
#2
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read the damn rules...
Promises meant a lot back then.
Last edited by ninja monkey at Jul 14, 2007,
#3
Quote by ninja monkey
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WTF??????
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#4
i thought it was cool and funny. whimsical. kind of like Shel Silverstein.

hey, Dr. Hook did a shel silverstein poem.
Songs!
Something's Changed
Frost

BC Rich Mockingbird Evil Edge
Dean Palomino Vintage Sunburst
Indiana Scout Acoustic in Sparkly Blue
Kustom Arrow 16DFX, soon to be a Vox Valvetronix 50
Dimebag Custom Crybaby
Fab Tone