Hey, good song. It isnt my cup of tea but i liked it. The opening part was soothing. I hope thats what you were going for. . The main riff starting at measure 5 sounds pretty good. Its a great pick up from the opener, although the transition is a little off. The chords in 18-19 and 25-26 had a cool medieval sound. I didnt like the time sig changes, tho. I think you couldve kept it in 8/4. Without that extra eighth note, i felt like i was being pushed through the song. But even without that change, its a great work!

crit mine?

I actually liked the time sig change and the whole thing actually. The only thing that had me going "eh" was the ending note on measure 17.

Last edited by interactivebios at Jul 15, 2007,
I'm used to getting bad crits for time sigs cos I pretty much suck at making it flow nicely without changing them. thanks guys
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