#1
Just two untitled poems. I'm new to the whole writing bit, so any advice would be greatly appreciated.

Untitled #1

Warm Embrace
Lifting hearts
Crushing Minds
Gentle Face
Broken Parts
We're Left to Find

Over Now the Honesty
Can't Stand the Sh*t
That you have told me
Lifted up to be sent down
On shredded wings
Of heartless beings
Causing us to drown


Untitled #2

I don't understand
caught inside the center
as the circle crashes in
caught inside
alone except for you

Just thought I'd let you know
How much you mean to me
before it's all over
and we never speak again

She picks up the pieces
Always when we fall
Who will pick up her pieces
Who will stand by her

I hoped the best for her
Since it was best for me
But seems she condemned
Herself to ruin

Just thought I'd let you know
How much you mean to me
before it's all over
And we never speak again


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