evening all, i have a little problem. I have written a minuite of a song and so far i think its ok. The problem is, i have no idea of where to go next in the song. Tell me what you think of the song and whats good/bad about it and please help me do something good with it.

Needs a main riff! Now it just sounds like an intro.
Quote by MightyAl
I think this is the real problem. Standing up to someone so fat has a couople major risks.
1)They might have a heart attack, fall on you and crush you
2)They might eat you. And not in a fun, girl-on-girl 'pics or it didn't happemn' way.
im thinking an opeth styled song. this is my first song ever. is that crazy? its going to be 7 mins plus long and its going to be called 'bleeding the bled'