#1
-Demon Hound-

I live in my corpse
And in my wooden crate
The worms all took the bait
Its times in my...
Life that I...
Hate...

Buried in the ground
My bones are all bound
Howling like a demon hound
Let me out!
Yeah I’m buried in the ground
My bones all bound
Howling like the demon hound
Let me out!
Let me...

Walk again on earth
Tell me all that I’m worth
(You show me) What I’ve done since birth
It’s these times in my...
Life that I...
Hate...

Buried in the ground
My bones are all bound
Howling like a demon hound
Let me out!
Yeah I’m buried in the ground
My bones all bound
Howling like the demon hound
Let me out!
Let me...

Now there’s time to think
I’m done with my shrink
I’m never coming back
It’s times in my...
Life that I...

Felt like until my death,
I could do no right,
It seemed the more I tried,
The more I hurt, so here today,
I lay while others pray...

Buried in the ground
My bones are all bound
Howling like a demon hound
Let me out!
Yeah I’m buried in the ground
My bones all bound
Howling like the demon hound
Let me out!
Let me...


(((((i dont know where my minds been lately but i've been writing such sucky crap. i mean, im not saying i was ever a god at writing songs but i used to at least be able to write something. go ahead...lemme know what sucks (even if it all sucks). tips are also welcome.))))))
#2
dude you ****ing rule man i love your song man great friggin job man hope you write more