#1
This is my second song, so its not the greatest, but let me know what you think. Its a kind of hard rock, thrash kind of song. thx in advance for critques and advice!


CHANCES


Chances are I'll never recover
From all this pain you've given me.
Lost in a world of darkness,
Through the stormy clouds I cannot see.
Good times have been lost forever
Where were you when i needed you?
Life throws twists and turns,
no one feels the way I do.
Dreams have turned to Nightmares,
You're not the sun anymore.
Can't escape my reality,
What is left to live for?

Chances!
Why are there no
Chances!
You give me no
Chances!
There are no chances.

Chances are you don't even remember
the day the sun disappeared.
You were lost among the stars and the moon,
It's everything i could have feared.
Life tends to move on,
but no, not this time.
Can't seem to get my life strait,
Is it anger or disbelief?
You couldn't care less,
You leave me to wallow in grief.

Chances!
Why are there no
Chances!
You give me no
Chances!
There are no chances.

Chances are no matter what I say,
You wont be able to hear.
You just sit in silence
Watching me shed another F***ing tear.
I've been struck by lightning,
It came, it went, it was gone.
Overcast skies illuminate my days,
Nothing could be more wrong.
Stuck forever in my memories,
Why does life have to stand still?
I just cant seem to move on,
There is a way, but there is no will.

Chances!
Why are there no
Chances!
You give me no
Chances!
There are no
Chances!
Why are there no
Chances!
You give me no
Chances!
There are no chances.
#2
wow. your lyrics are really good. in my opinion, i think it will be better if they verses were a bit shorter.
#3
I like it alot, I would just take the cursing out of the line Watching me shed another F***ing tear. I think it's unneeded and doesn't really add anything. Otherwise, I think they are good.