#1
Here's a new song a wrote.
i actually wrote this one long ago, but i fixed it and now it's finished(kinda).
well, any help and edvices will be cool, and if you have an idea for the song, it would be awsome to hear it .

C4C

edit: i added the song in midi.
Attachments:
Num.11.zip
Last edited by vinguler at Aug 11, 2007,
#3
I liked it. It kinda reminded me of cemetery gates for some reason though. It's a little short though, maybe add another heavy part at the end. Other than being short it's really good.

Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=631064&highlight=mellowish
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#5
That was pretty cool. It sounded a little jumbled at a point though. Other than that, I don't really know anything else to say, it was good... But I agree with Mindchanger, it was a little short for a song, but for an instrumental thing it's fine.

Listen to mine if you have time? =) http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=631818