#1
Hey i just recorded this song..
Its an acoustic song i wrote on sunday
Im not really a singer, im intrested in what u think about the vocal melody, and what you guys think of the music..
I already know the vocals are **** so u dont hav 2 tell me again, but if u must try and be nice

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BTW this song is called 10 year reunion


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#2
the chords are nice. The words are so dull as i'm listening I am distracted from the vocals. so, maybe that's a good thing...keep at it.
"There but for fortune go you or I"- Phil Ochs
#3
u dont have an aweful voice, just try to keep ur voice from goin all over the place and try to keep it in one spot (cut back on tremolo). the music was great, keep it up. crit mine, link is in my sig under recordings
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