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I'm still working on this one, but please give your thoughts, crits, irish jigs?


Meet me on the streets with venomous eyes
Black Widow smile and aimless tries
Surgical precision with rusty blades
touched to the burning tongue until the break of day

we listened intently to sounds of aimless desire
The lusty word become a roaring fire
Consuming intrigue with our slutted lives
honestly I'm forgot to breathe, honey, I lied

Open up
and please shut the doors behind
Open up
these salted wounds don't mind
Open up
with sinister precision make the cut
Open up
my veins and sink into my blood

Gluttony of organs
and the blood runs as ice
the memories to haunt you
of your darkest vice
Giving up the scarlet threads
tied round your neck
We've evidence to hang you
But we lack respect

We hope the vultures take you
And you never find eternal rest
When you scream your torment
remember I knew it best
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#3
yeah, that one bugs me too...but i can't think of any way to fix it
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