Here is a fourth of a song. Meaning it's a work in progress.

Please tell me what you think.

Even if you don't like it.

Tell me. =D


It's "WIP Song", obviously.

Edit: Also... I'm really looking for some crit on my vocal melody... I'm not to good at putting melodies with words into songs.
Quote by eggo_boi_15
Arnt the first few things anyone learns on a guitar is

1. Nirvana - smells like teen spirit
2. Prince - Smoke on the water
3. White stripes - seven nation army

^ lol
Last edited by Spaghetti at Jul 20, 2007,
nice riff
Some Scientists claim that hydrogen, because it is so plentiful, is the basic building block of the universe. I dispute that. I say there is more stupidity than hydrogen, and that is the basic building block of the universe. - Frank Zappa