Hello there,

I can say that this is a good start, but IMO you should develop the riff. You build the mood by adding more and more drum part, but it would be cool if you make some breaks in the riffs in the parts where the drums play breaks, so you`ll have the complete and organic sounding rythm part. It would also sound more hard of you`ll break the constant rythmic structure of the riff - just let it be somewhat frayed and it will sound more catchy and hard.
The sounding was nice as far as I could hear the lo-fi stream. So keep it going - there is always a way to improve

Regards, Ash.

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