#1
Hi were a new band out of the Chicago area and wanting some critique on our new song. Please feel free to bash us, or give us a positive comment. Honesty is the best policy here.

Goto myspace.com/kingswayrock to listen.
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#2
I liked the song, Very good drummer, my only problem, was the singer, I did not like his voice at all. I would suggest getting a new one
And also, i didnt hear much of any bass in there at all...
#3
Thanks for the comment the bass is very much in there its just similar to the guitar part so it kind of blends in
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#5
The song itself isnt that bad. It's not really progressive tho, it flirts alot with a punkpop influence, specially the way your singer sings it. It's not bad but I guess you have to work it in your music
#6
thanks i really dont know what to call it so i just named it progressive
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#10
i like it. all my friends bands are pop punk and they sorta jsut try to get alota songs and they get sloppy. but i like this its realy solid and all the parts fit great
#11
Pretty cool opening line, and I definetly hear the bass. Don't know what that was talking about. Maybe it's because I know what listen for cause I play bass too. But I think it sounds a little sloppy. Singer's not bad, just needs a little work. You got a good drum sound going on. I really like the bass fills in the chorus, and the vocal harmonies. Nice guitar lines also. Pretty good, I like it. I think the bass just sounds kinda sloppy. It doesn't sound very tight and it sounds like he keeps accidentally hitting the pick ups. Keep up the good work.

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https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=637913
#12
ya i played the bass parts, but im a guitar player so it is probably really sloppy, but i couldnt post the song without bass, I sing too and im working on my voice i know i need to work on the singing but that was my first song so i dont think im off too to bad of a start
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#25
pretty nifty! i like it, but the singer is god awful lol.
A damn good singer is EASILY the hardest thing to find for a band.

everything else is pretty good i enjoyed it
#26
Very cool song to be honest. It's the sort of music I like, which is quite rare where I live. It is a little sloppy in places but I think that it will come together with practice.
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#27
siema, polski zespol? , czy nie? ojojoj :P , vocals are good, but the only thing that cracks me up is that in those vocals, i dunno y, or if it's just me, but i ****en hear like a small Polish accent , might be just me , pozdro
#28
Hey i think the music is quite good i like the druming, personaly i like the second one on the list best, i forget what its called but its good