#1
Just got bored... since I'm staying up all night and decided to write this little thing...

lemme know what ya think
Attachments:
whatnot.zip
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#2
i noticed that both me and you have had many views, but no comments, i thought it was my duty to comment....

critting as i listen...

the intro is awesome, love the leads during and after it

like how the song speeds up
section c sounds cool, sounds a bit epic

e's good too, and f, love the choir ahhs

i like how it goes back into the acoustics for the outro, i like them kind of songs

all in all, it was a pretty nice song...not sure what id change, but i would change something.
but still the song was great
i give it a 8.5/10

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#3
thank yeh kindly

critted yours
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#4
This is very good. The only thing i dont really like is how you go down like all the frets at one point in the song, that sounds good, but i think it could sound better. The bass was very well done, the drums were excellent, and the guitar work was wonderful.
All in all very well done. Keep it up!

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#5
Sweet acoustic riffage. The intro solo is pretty sweet too. So far, I probably like this more than your other songs. Once the distortion comes in, then riffs are pretty cool, but the drums are a little lacking. Part C was great but sounded like the was too much going on. Parts E and F didn't seem that special. Acoustic outro was ace as well. Overall, pretty good song dude. Good job!

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