#1
this song is a relaspe of my old stuff....cause lately i have been writing more solution and helping stuff that talks about problems today....so i thought that it would be nice to go back to the old with a new spin and i think that anyone that is a fan of my old and new pieces will like this song i hope.... C4C


Dancing Witches

Darkest comes over the rising sun
Black pierces the eyes of the young
Horrible sins and wickedness deep in the beast’s lungs

Blood runs deep in the hole of the dead
As one evil and spirit focuses into one
To make Satan’s heartless on

Eternally destruction of war
Ha watching saviors murdering *****s
Look at saints and call them petafile bitches
Causes there are all dancing witches

Millions of dead on the door step of heaven
Satanic harlots have sex with priest
While angles rip off there wings
And pay Tribute to the father of the beast

Eternally destruction of war
Ha watching saviors murdering *****s
Look at saints and call them petafile bitches
Causes there are all dancing witches

Hell has fused into earth
As one fiery underworld
As a Poisonous sexual slaughter-land
Were the pray execute man

Pray to your maker, and
Sacrice the infants at birth
With there virgin blood spited on unholy grounds
With the carnival of satanas burning on crosses
Of hundreds of life loses

Eternally destruction of war
Ha watching saviors murdering *****s
Look at saints and call them petafile bitches
Causes there are all dancing witches
#2
Dancing Witches

Darkest comes over the rising sun
Black pierces the eyes of the young
Horrible sins and wickedness deep in the beast’s lungs

Should read darkness not "darkest"
The third line seems too long. I would trim it down

Blood runs deep in the hole of the dead
As one evil and spirit focuses into one
To make Satan’s heartless on

The way the last two lines read was kind of awkward

Eternally destruction of war
Ha watching saviors murdering *****s
Look at saints and call them petafile bitches
Causes there are all dancing witches

Millions of dead on the door step of heaven
Satanic harlots have sex with priest
While angles rip off there wings
And pay Tribute to the father of the beast

This is probably one of the most metal verses I have ever read

Eternally destruction of war
Ha watching saviors murdering *****s
Look at saints and call them petafile bitches
Causes there are all dancing witches

Hell has fused into earth
As one fiery underworld
As a Poisonous sexual slaughter-land
Were the pray execute man

I like the way pray was used here. I would switch it to "where the pray hunt men" because it gets the effect more


Pray to your maker, and
Sacrice the infants at birth
With there virgin blood spited on unholy grounds
With the carnival of satanas burning on crosses
Of hundreds of life loses

Eternally destruction of war
Ha watching saviors murdering *****s
Look at saints and call them petafile bitches
Causes there are all dancing witches


Anyways, I hope this helps