#1
The song is appropriately titled Pretty In Pink for all you Molly Ringwald fans.

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Originally Posted by sadistic_monkey
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#2
it get a lil repetative after a while, some cool riffs tho. i liked when everything stopped and it was just the guitar. needs a lead in there really bad, like a crazyass solo. this would be alot better with lyrics. so far this is a solid attempt, if i were u tho i would add lyrics and a lead. keep it up. crit mine, link is in my sig under recordings.
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#3
awsome keep up the good work feel free to stop and check out our band www.myspace.com/eternitylostrock and let us know what you think
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#4
I love the harmonized intro
It really gives it a special epic kind of opening that definantly is going to draw the litener in

Structure:
I think the next riff got pretty repetitive, maybe adding slight phrases with a lead guitar will liven it up.
I definatly liked the faster part that followed after that, it was catchy.
I dont know about holding out that last chord before the break. The drive was way too high so it sounded alot like noise.

As for the remaining riffs following that, I think you should put in a solo around there and that will really complete the song.

Generally, your playing was pretty clean, and your tone was good also. The drums were standard double pedalling and flowed well. Add some vocals/lead if you will and you have the start of a very nice song here (that will negate the repeditivness of the tracK)
Keep up the good work bro, I enjoyed listening to your piece.

I will be very appreciative if you can return the favor and crit my bands new song found at
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#5
Still kind of playing around with this track, prolly adding a part to break it up a little. Thanks for the crit.
Originally Posted by sadistic_monkey
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