#1
hey people, i just started writing lyrics, and this is my 3rd set that i've written, so yeah, crit 'em. also, someone said i ripped the chorus from Incubus? i don't know though 'cause i don't listen to 'em...so yeah, here they are:

ERSE 1

Plummet into the Abyss,

So we can hide from all of this,

And there we will wait,

And once and for all we'll learn to hate,

Not only ourselves,

But everyone else,

We'll banish them to this place we call hell...



CHORUS

So pardon me,

While i burst into flames,

I've had enough of this world,

And it's people's mindless games,

So leave me while i burn,

And rise above the flames,

I...WILL NEVER...BE...THE SAME...

So pardon me,

While i burst into flames,

I've had enough of this world,

And it's people's mindless games,

So leave me while i burn,

And rise above the flames,

(screamed) I'LL NEVER BE THE SAME...



VERSE 2

We'll vanish as the darkness surrounds,

To where we won't have to muffle our sounds,

To where we won't have to live in fear,

So we'll leave the darkness and journey here,

To this world we can finally call home,

But first you must read from the ancient tome,

Once a new life is born,

Yours will eventually be torn...



CHORUS



VERSE 3

Count down to the extinction,

This all leads to Ragnarok,

The end of the world,

The end of a life,

There is no point to try to strife,

Away from the world,

Away from the person you've become,

Away from this life,

Away from what you've done...


CHORUS x2
#7
Brandon Boyd is the lead singer of Incubus. Incubus have a song called 'Pardon me' in which a line in the lyrics go : Pardon me as I burst into flames
#8
ah, so uh did i steal the lyrics to the chorus or something? 'cause i heard my friend singing 'em and he said they weren't used by any big band or anything so i used 'em for my chorus