#1
Who are you!
to tell me these things
I can no longer find
a place in my head

To worry about you
and all your shit
I can no longer
find a place to escape

(Chorus)
Turn around and face the truth (Background Vocals)
you know you're way in over your head
Turn around and see the light (Background Vocals)
you know you're way out of your mind

You're a figure!
of my strengthened hate
The whiskey mocks me
and all I do is wait

You're a demon!
That haunts me today
and by tomorrow
I know I'll be dead

(Chorus)
Turn around and face the truth (Background Vocals)
you know you're way in over your head
Turn around and see the light (Background Vocals)
you know you're way out of your mind

(Spoken Word)

After all these thoughts and feelings
The demons are finally gone...
And all I can say is
Become The Weapon
And be afflicted, no more.

(Solo)

(Chorus)
Turn around and face the truth (Background Vocals)
you know you're way in over your head
Turn around and see the light (Background Vocals)
you know you're way out of your mind


hope you like it
#2
i really like ur song . i can imagine the whole instrumentation for it in my head. i just want to say keep writing u hae a good talent for flow
Hi
#3
Thank you sir for the critique, this is supposed to be a very fast song actually lol