Nice acoustic version. I like the way you play the hammer ons Fru usually plays as chords. Lol at you forgetting words Nice voice by the way, made it your own and sounds really nice. Afew small timing problems but they're barely noticeable. I love your voice in the chorus. You play and sing very well together. Outro sounds awesome, and so does your voice, quite hard to get those "woah no" type sounds correct, it sounds great. Nice strumming pattern and ended nicely to. Overall a pretty sweet job.
Wow! Im really really happy at everything you said. Ill work on a better version just because of your encouragement! I seriously have never gotten such a nice response to one of my songs! Thanks so much!