#1
Crit appreciated, thank you.

Locked In The Dark

I remember you smiling in the corner of the room,
But now that smile doesn't promise to be back soon.
I've lost hope in talking
And now I just can't take it.

It's so cold in this house,
But I'm still sweating over you.

I've turned to books to help me find answers
But all I get is more questions thrown at me.
And now I'm losing hope in reading,
Because it only brings back feelings.

It's so cold in this house,
But I'm still sweating over you.

And don't think I don't care
If I don't shed a tear,
I'm just trying to hide
All my deepest fears
And I'm ripping the hair
Off the top of my head,
As I'm locked in the dark
And I can't seem to find a way out.

I can't seem to find a way out.

So cold in this house,
But I'm still sweating over you.

And I'm locked in the dark,
Trying to find the way out.
'Mon The Biffy!

Boing Boing

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#2
I like it, I like the fact that you didn't use a rhyme scheme, I'm eternally stuck using those. Quick question though, did you have a particular style of music picked for it?

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#3
At the moment, just acoustic. Quite heavy strumming though, so it may get changed.

Cheers
'Mon The Biffy!

Boing Boing

Member #2 of the Biffy Fan Club. PM onlyonehere to join.

Quote by Caustic
I like this guy.