#1
This song is a quarter cover and 3/4 mine I just wanted to experiment a bit. I used the main riff from the song "Falling" By John Frusciante, from the Brown Bunny soundtrack. Most of the lead guitar is reversed, so I just jammed 2 separate pieces of guitar and reversed them. The end part of the song is my creation, with the chord progression and then the final piece for the outro.
I didn't spend huge amounts of time on this, and it's only a rough outline of what I'm going to do, so don't be too harsh.
Also, I'm using a Marshall MG15 and a £3 mic So the quality is bad. There's a few mistakes, I know, but just some crit would be nice

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The song's called "turn the volume up", do as it says, as it is quite quiet

#3
Quote by gallagher2006
It needs some vocals as it's pretty much the same all the way through =[

It's an "instrumental" of sorts Not meant to have vocals. It's only short anyway. What do you think oh narrow minded one?
#4
you have interesting music, but it needs work. As it is now it sounds like a lot of unfinished tunes that go nowhere. I like your ingenuity using different effects. keep working and you'll make some fine music.

crit mine: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=640438
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-1979 Gibson Les paul
-Gibson Hound Dog Dorbro
-ZVex Nano tube amp
-Zinky Blue Velvet Tube amp
-Lots of EH pedal
-BSM Treble Booster
#5
Cheers man ^ Yeah I know, it's nothing serious just me messing around really. I'll crit yours in your thread. Thanks again.