#1
Heres a new song that ive wrote. I havent wrote a solo as i really suck at writing them so if anyone wants to write one it will be much abliged (sp!). C4C as always
Attachments:
Song.zip
Sunderland AFC
Last edited by hendo123456789 at Aug 1, 2007,
#2
sounds really good! do u have any lyrics to go with it? i would definitely suggest happy, "easygoing " lyrics. some parts go on for a little bit too long in my opinion though. Like the riff that you have going from bar 42 to 64, i would say to repeat that riff for 16 bars at the most then do a different riff, then come back to the first riiff again. But, i fyou have lyrics over it then it might not matter so much. anyways theres my advice/input!! i hope it helps
#3
i like it.
its kinda happy song, not too repetitive even without lyrics.
the bass is awsome, but too bad you didn't write solo (yet, i hope).
the only thing i didn't like about it is the melody the lead have the intro, i think you should change bars 12, 16, 20 etc. i hope you understand what im saying.

anyways, nice stuff, only becouse there's no solo, and the bars mantioned above...
8/10.
crit my songs, (PLZ):
[thread="610914"]Num.2[/thread]
[thread="610914"]Num.3[/thread]
[thread="610914"]Num.4[/thread]
[thread="620776"]Num.9[/thread]
[thread="620776"]Num.10[/thread]
[thread="630441"]Num.11[/thread]
[thread="637838"]Num.12[/thread]
[thread="638436"]Num.13[/thread]
[thread="639309"]Num.14(UnFinshed)[/thread]
[thread="638439"]Num.15(UnFinshed)[/thread]
[thread="642193"]Num.17[/thread]
[thread="643556"]Num.18[/thread]
[thread="651276"]Num.19[/thread]
[thread="660867"]Out Of The Darkness[/thread]
[thread="661588"]Begining[/thread]
#4
Thanks a lot for the crits so far guys I would write a sol but i just cannot transcribe what i play into GP4
Sunderland AFC
#6
I thought it sounded pretty cool so i gave it a try ill finish when i get back i got to go to a funeral right now so i really cant finish it.
Attachments:
Attempt.zip
Guitars:
Ibanez UV777P
Ibanez RGD2127FX
Ibanez RG3120TW
Ibanez RGD7321
Ibanez RG6003FM
Ibanez SA160
Jackson Slatxmg3-7
Amps:
Baron Custom Amps K88
Rivera Knucklehead TRE
Fryette Sig: X
Randall RM4 /w Modded modules
Cabs:
Mesa 4x12
Bogner 4x12
Peavey 4x12(K85s)
Last edited by kylendm at Aug 1, 2007,
#9
well here it is finished. :P
Attachments:
Attempt.zip
Guitars:
Ibanez UV777P
Ibanez RGD2127FX
Ibanez RG3120TW
Ibanez RGD7321
Ibanez RG6003FM
Ibanez SA160
Jackson Slatxmg3-7
Amps:
Baron Custom Amps K88
Rivera Knucklehead TRE
Fryette Sig: X
Randall RM4 /w Modded modules
Cabs:
Mesa 4x12
Bogner 4x12
Peavey 4x12(K85s)
#11
Thanks mate glad you liked it.
Guitars:
Ibanez UV777P
Ibanez RGD2127FX
Ibanez RG3120TW
Ibanez RGD7321
Ibanez RG6003FM
Ibanez SA160
Jackson Slatxmg3-7
Amps:
Baron Custom Amps K88
Rivera Knucklehead TRE
Fryette Sig: X
Randall RM4 /w Modded modules
Cabs:
Mesa 4x12
Bogner 4x12
Peavey 4x12(K85s)