#1
i wrote this song cause i haven't made a single song about god since i started writing. & since i'm christian i was more than happy to make one. crits would be really helpful. thnx!
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the streets are filled with human dirt
for those who can't see the homeless
& government has filled our heads
with t.v. screens & violence

half the world wants (half the world wants)
another god upon a stage
the other half needs (the other half needs)
the silence broken by bullets ricocheting

from the highest high
from a place unknown
there is someone
a different kind of god
he loves everyone
he's the gifted son
he is the one
the loving god

vanity rules this spinning sphere
we idolize our mirrors
teens make fun of emo kids
then slit their wrists afterwards

half the world wants (half the world wants)
an image of themselves as president
the other half needs (the other half needs)
a sad song to feel better about themselves

from the highest high
from a place unknown
there is someone
a different kind of god
he loves everyone
he's the gifted son
he is the one
the loving god
#3
Quote by turnfoot

teens make fun of emo kids
then slit their wrists afterwards


i mean.... what the **** was that?
#4
Quote by turnfoot

the streets are filled with human dirt
for those who can't see the homeless
& government has filled our heads
with t.v. screens & violence

half the world wants (half the world wants)
another god upon a stage
the other half needs (the other half needs)

the silence broken by bullets ricocheting



I like the into. I could see the bold as a chorus for a really good song, with the other line changed or sang differently then how im picturing it. Everything else is pretty good too. Id could turn out quite well with the right rythm behind it.
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One of my friends said to the principle once,
"NO! The voices tell me not to talk to you!" *Runs away on all fours*
The principle eventually caught up to him and gave him a drug test.
Last edited by Pr3vieWX360 at Aug 3, 2007,