#1
this is my first song i've written and i know it sucks but i need advice on how to write better songs so give me feedback please.

Hollister Youth

You want to fit in you say
All you have to do is obey
Conformity never hurt anyone
Oh except for those 6 million chosen ones

Hollister youth marching this way
There beliefs are here to stay
Point your right hand to the sky
March; yea kick your legs real high

Of course our way is right
Submit or get ready to fight
Believe what you’re taught
Or prepare to be shot

Hollister youth marching this way
There beliefs are here to stay
Point your right hand to the sky
March; yea kick your legs real high

I exaggerate you think
Fantasy to reality in just a blink
Fourth Reich coming soon
Your options; die or attune

Hollister youth marching this way
There beliefs are here to stay
Point your right hand to the sky
March; yea kick your legs real high
#2
try varying your rhyme scheme a little aabb gets old pretty quickly.

also, learn what a reich is, because that doesnt really make much sense. And dont rhyme "anyone" with "ones"
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